Reviewed by Key-Keeper Ava
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Author: BlueberriesFromTay
Title: Sinners
Cover:
4/5
The cover is nice. I recommend making the ‘their sins are their downfall’ a little bigger and it is hard to see ‘Lynn’.
Blurb:
4/5
I like the blurb, it has an air of mystery and intrigues readers. You shouldn’t begin sentences with and so try re-wording that.
Title:
5/5
Intriguing. Mysterious. Fitting. The title captures the idea of your story and pulls readers in.
Plot:
8/10
The plot could be executed in many different ways which leaves readers on the edge of their seats,
wondering how you are going to spin it.
Character Development:
9/15
The character’s feelings and thoughts could be shown and not told more often. For example in the first
chapter, it begins with ‘Quinn wanted to hurt herself’, which is an interesting beginning but it would be better to give readers some insight into Quinn’s mind. You could write her thoughts, like this:
You will never be good enough.
He will never want you.
You are nothing.
Then you could say Quinn wanted to hurt herself.
Spelling and Grammar:
9/10
It is obvious that a lot of effort has been invested in proof reading and editing chapters. There are little
to no spelling mistakes. The only thing that caught my eye is that sometimes you use a full stop when a comma would be much more effective and would help the flow.
Overall:
8/10
Other Comments:
I would highly recommend Sinners to anyone who is looking for a great mystery/thriller read. It gives
detailed description into the flaws of human beings. I hope my feedback was helpful!
-Key-keeper Ava
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