Reviewed by Key Keeper Cade Brema_stone_is_alive
Title: I Love Him
Author: Ihaveabigdickformen
Cover 1/5
I do not know what Tony and Peter have to do with your story.
Blurb 2/5
Your blurb told me nothing about your book. Plain and simple.
Title 5/5
That is one of the parts of your book I liked because it actually made sense.
Plot 6/10
I got your plot. You need to write more in your chapters tho. I get it is poetry but this is just real talk here. More detail=more readers
Character 10/15
You showed us a new side of love and hate in your book and the M/C Alexander was amazing in my opinion.
Spelling 0/10
You did not edit this at all. I can tell.
Overall 5/10
Your book made me cry and smile somehow. But you need to put trigger warning in your book because of how deep of a topic it was based off of.
I really think u need to learn more about rape before you write about it. I made the same mistake but for a different reason. It made me angry to read him getting raped by his crush and it broke my heart when he just forgave him and started dating him like nothing had gone wrong. Just saying. I do not mean to be harsh just saying what I think and as always 💜
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