Reviewed by Key Keeper Ray teenagewriter18
Author: HY_Verity0623
Title: Until We Meet Again
Genre: Fanfiction
Review
Cover: 1/5
The cover could have been better because it’s not actually attracting more reader. If I were to judge a book by it’s cover to read, I would be a little unsure about this one but there isn’t anything which can be improved if you try 😊
Blurb: 5/5
I loved your blurb. It’s just perfect because neither is it revealing too much about the story nor is it keeping something back, it has the ideal amount of information necessary to attract more readers.
Title: 3.5/5
I think it’s pretty much appropriate for the book although adapting to something else isn’t bad too,
Plot: 10/10
This is probably the most I’ve given to a book and I have to say that I absolutely love the plot of your story and its got me so hooked up that I can’t even explain it. I mean I am not even in the ‘Attack on Titan’ fandom and I still am loving this book.
Character development: 14/15
I love how Val develops throughout the storyline and she has progressed to be so relatable to a huge number of girls out there and I personally like Levi’s character even though he had been portrayed like an anti-hero because I have kept the blurb in mind which said about him being broken
Spelling and grammar: 9/10
Your grammar and spelling are fine but you’ve used some difficult words at some places which might turn a reader away due the misunderstanding but overall it’s decent because there aren’t any noticeable error in grammar or spelling.
Overall: 7.5/10
If only you can improve the cover and maybe change a bit in the title, this could be one of the best fanfics on Wattpad
Other comments (No marks): As I said, this is a wonderful story. It just needs improvement in the cover, there are a ton of graphic shops out their so just go out select one, tell them about you story and then, Voila! You have an awesome cover. I suggest @CaliKat000 – Lockhart Graphics, @graphixxx or @rubyruins – rosewater graphics 😊
And then about the title, maybe something a little shorter which is catchy, maybe ship ‘A Levi Ackerman time travel love story’ to the description because the first line of the description is visible and you can always use Levi in the cover which while confirm it consists him.
Love Ray💙
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