action/adventures: the crossing destinies

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Judge: KatnissEverdeen12372

Title. The Crossing Destinies

Author: Witto150

Genre: Action/Adventure

Title/Cover/Description:

The title fit really well with the story, as did the cover. The description was very detailed, yet didn't say too much.

4.8/5

Beginning/Details:

The beginning was kind of interesting, it just was a little boring at certain parts. It was still really fun to read. It was also really detailed.

3.9/5

Character Development:

Well, Shadow and Sonic are developing really well. I'm not a big fan of Sonic the Hedgehog, so I don't know much about it. This story told me all I needed to know about the characters, however. That's good for people who aren't in the fandom.

3.7/5

Plot:

Good plot, I like the idea. It flows very nicely, and there are no big holes in it.

3.5/5

Grammer/Spelling:

There were no huge Grammer mistakes, and I didn't see any spelling either.

4.6/5

Overall: 4.1/5


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