Short Story: Lost Without You

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Title: lost without you

Genre: one shot

Author: AngelGoldieReal

Judge: CathrineRajkumar

Cover/title: the cover is superb but some words which is used in winner sticker is not clear, otherwise it's amazing. Title "lost without you" is also amazing.


I would love to give 1.7/2



Description: The description is small and simple. For an one shot though this much description is enough.



I would love to give 0.7/1



Storyline: the concept of the story is amazing. The cover which you used in the starting of the story is amazing compared to your present cover ( that's my opinion). And there are some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, so if you edit those then your story will be amazing.



I would love to give 1.6/2



Total score: 4/5



All the best for your future dear.....



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