Short Story: A Day In Limbo 🏅

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Title: a day in limbo

Genre: short story

Author: Belle_Dowson

Judge: CathrineRajkumar

Cover/title: your cover is simply superb and your cover itself makes me to read your whole story. And about title "one day in limbo" it's just amazing and out of the box not something cliche.



I would love to give 1.8/2

Description: your description is sweet and simple and it also increase the curiosity how she lost her everything in one day.


I would love to give 0.8/1



Storyline: the concept of your story is awesome, from the start till the last I loved the way you write. Though there are some small mistakes that you can edit it.



I would love to give 1.7/2



Total score: 4.3/5



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