Action/adventure:The Ultimatum Book 1 - Signs of Magic

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Judge: KatnissEverdeen12372

Title . The Ultimatum Book 1 - Signs of Magic

Author :Hunter_Yonk

Genre. Action/Adventure

Title/Cover/Description:

The title really fits in with the story. The cover fits with the story, it would be better if it were more exciting. The description is really interesting, and made me want to read the book.

4.8/5

Beginning/Details:

The beginning to this story was interesting. I thought they were in an actual war, when it ended up being laser tag. This story was detailed.

4.5/5

Character Development:

I think Rose was a very unique character. She had a good personality at first, but when the magic was added, it just made it better.

4.4/5

Plot: This story flowed nicely, and there weren't any big holes in the plot. I liked the idea of the young female leader with the overprotective older brother. I thought it would be a normal war story, but then magic was thrown into the mix.

4.9/5

Grammer/Spelling:

There weren't really any noticable spelling or Grammer mistakes.

4.6/5

Overall: 4.6/5

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