action/adventures: ascension of phoenix

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Judge: KatnissEverdeen12372

Title: Ascension of the Phoenix

Author:xDRAG0N0VAx

Genre. Action/Adventure

Title/Cover/Description:

The title and cover go well with the story and each other. The cover is very beautiful. The description really makes me want to read.

4.9/5

Beginning/Details:

I like how the story starts off with a chase. The story is pretty detailed, but some parts need a bit more information.

3.9/5

Character Development:

I like how the main female is really tough, and loves what she does. She saves lives. She and her partner are developing well. They work well together and their personalities fit.

4/5

Plot: The plot is well written and flows. There are a couple holes in the plot at times.

3.8/5

Grammer/Spelling:

There aren't many Grammer mistakes that I noticed. There are a few missing commas, but that's it.

3.5/5

Overall: 4/5



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