Title: dhadkan
Genre: one shot
Author: Swarmayi
Judge: CathrineRajkumar
Cover/title: your cover is awesome and the lines in your cover is simply superb, those lines attracts me the most. Coming to your title "dhadkan" means heartbeat which was superb but still if you translate in English it will be easy for people who don't know Hindi.
I would love to give 1.7/2
Description: in description you didn't write anything apart from it's swasan one shot. You could have write something in the description.
I would love to give 0.3/1
Storyline: the story is awesome but you have add Hindi dialogue in between which you can give translation in English. There are some grammatical errors, so it will be good if you do editing
I would love to give 1.5/2
Total: 3.5/5
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