Book: Natasha: The First Hybrid
Genre:Horror/Paranormal
Writer: Queen_kim247
Reviewed by non_deficere
Cover/Description:
I liked your cover, it definitely raised my curiosity. I absolutely love your description, it gives me just enough info about what I'm about to read but leaves a lot of mystery in the air, I also loved the concept of Queen of the underworld/ Kind of Humans and King of Demons.
The beginning:
Amazing cast, and I think is the first time that I see a lot of this beautiful humans as characters to any wattpad book, plus Shakira as a character?! Wow!
The quotes give a really nice touch to the beginning of your chapters.
Detailing/Grammar:
You have amazing grammar skills, and as I was reading your book I could actually envision the story in my mind, as the detailing was superb.
Character Development/Plot:
You introduced Natasha amazingly well, I could instantly relate to her, i could connect to her which made my reading experience a whole lot better.
My view as a reader:
The description is perfect, it makes me want to open your book, and overall everything is just perfection, from the plot to the development of the characters, the way you develop the story was also superb, but one thing that put me off was your choice of language used in some parts of your story, I'm not entirely sure which language that is, but as a reader I want to be able to understand everything, so even if for you that choice of language is important, add a translation at the same time or add it to you authors notes at the end so your readers won't miss a thing.
Just as a side note(and having zero impact on your review) I admire your goals, is a motivation for a writer to get reads and likes, but I hope you are not looking at those targets too much, sometimes (or too often) the best writers get underrated among the wattpad world and although that should and hopefully will change your gift for writing shouldn't, so please no matter what keep writing!
All the best :)
-claudushka
I would rate this book 4.95/5
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