Judge:KatnissEverdeen12372
Title : The Perfect Pet
Author. jettmanas
Genre. Humor
Title/Cover/Description:
I like the title, because it goes with the story. The cover also goes with the story, and it looks really nice. The description could be a bit more detailed.
3.2/5
Beginning/Art:
The beginning was good. The first page introduces Marta and Chester. It does it in a sort of funny way too. The art is very detailed, and very well drawn.
3.4/5
Character Development:
Marta, Chester, and Raul all develop well.
Marta is a girl who wants to show what her pet can do. Chester wants to show what he can do. Raul is the enemy figure, who wants to stop them.
2.8/5
Plot:
The plot is kind of basic, but it is also interesting. It starts off with the girl going to school, like normal. Then the bully brags about winning the talent show. Then she enters and ends up doing well.
3.5/5
Grammer/Spelling:
On the small bit of writing you wrote, there were only a couple Grammer and Spelling mistakes.
3.4/5
Overall: 3.2/5
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