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Elemental Faith

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Reviewed by: Annie_Moon2001

Author: CatW2477

Cover: 8/10

The cover looks really nice but it's not attention grabbing.

Description/Summary: 9½/10

It's really good. It made me really curious to see what will happen. The only issue is that the last paragraph seems off. It needs a little brushing up.

Chapter Review: 9½/10

The book is really creative and well written. I noticed some slight errors. (Like you instead of your). Also, I'll advice that you avoid those little spaces you keep to indicate a paragraph. (What I mean here is that when you keep a space between two sentences, it's a paragraph).

Activity of the Writer: 8/10

The writer did not reply to some messages on the comment box but replied to all messages on the conversation box.

Plot: 10/10

The story is really interesting. It's creative and well written.

Overall Advice:

I'll advice you edit the description as well as the story. I can assure you that it would not take time to edit since there's no much error.I believe you should also try to reply to all comments. I know it can be stressful but not replying can be mean in some cases.

I'll be giving this book a 10/10.