celestial

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Last edited » November 23, 2023
Author's Note » "it'll take me some days" Author _1name said four months ago.

so sorry fr LMAOOO i wayyyy underestimated how long this book was and i'm a chronic procrastinator yet a perfectionist. but here's the long awaited list of everything i updated and/or added before marking this book "completed" since wattpad doesn't push notifications for edits.
* for fellow americans who celebrate, this is my thanksgiving gift to you ╰(*'︶'*)╯♡

if something has a ⭐️, something substantial changed in that chapter (i.e a scene added) and underscoring means it's a little significant but not as important as ⭐️ (i.e more dialogue). most of this will be grammar and formatting, however.

thank you guys so much for the support :) 🫶 it's so cliché but i deadass didn't expect it and was just writing this book bc i couldn't find any EQG rainbow dash fanfics i liked. i was so shocked when i actually had people waiting for me to update.

i'm gonna start working on another book (deciding between hunter x hunter, voltron, and aot/snk) so i won't be disappearing if you like my writing style :P
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GENERAL FIXES
- Changed all "Referred Movie" to "Referenced Movie(s)"
- Changed all "Author's Note » N/A" to "Author's Note » "

READER DESCRIPTION (1/2)
- Minor grammar fixes
- Specified that Y/N used to be homeschooled

一
- Minor grammar fixes
- Highlighted that the story begins in 2016 March
- Added a small detail that RD started understanding algebra when Y/N explains that parabolas are the shape that volleyballs make when hit

二
- Minor grammar fixes
- Removed and reworded some paragraphs to help the reading flow
- Fixed some inconsistencies with the timeline

⭐️ 三
- Added time markers
- Added a "A FEW MOMENTS LATER" scene before RD has dinner with Y/N

四
- Minor grammar fixes
- Reworded some paragraphs to help the reading flow

五
- Combined/condensed some paragraphs to help the reading flow
- Removed unnecessary paragraphs that disrupted the reading flow
- Added a few more dialogue lines between Rarity and RD at Pinkie Pie's sleepover

六
- Fixed some formatting
- Reworded some paragraphs and dialogue

七
- Added/fixed time markers
- Fixed some formatting
- Combined/condensed some paragraphs to help the reading flow

八
- Added time a "A FEW MINUTES LATER" marker
- Minor grammar fixes
- Combined/condensed some paragraphs to help the reading flow
- Edited a couple of dialogue lines

九
- Fixed time markers
- Changed "lunch number" to "student ID number" (lunch number is the term at my school but i think the second makes more general sense lol)
- Fixed some formatting
- Minor grammar fixes
- Added pictures of RD's room for visual people
- Added a few more lines of dialogue
- Changed "middle school" to "junior high"
- Fixed Y/N's mom being African to specifically African American

十
- Fixed formatting
- Reworded some paragraphs and dialogue
- Added one sentence of dialogue to RD at the end of the chapter when she was talking about being left back in soccer