Hi everyone, I've written my first book and I'm open to criticism. Please feel free to give your honest feedback in the comments.
Please note that the following content is a piece of fiction. Any names, characters, businesses, places, events, or incidents mentioned in this work are purely a product of the author's imagination or utilized in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
Also, this is a first draft. Chapters are mildly proofread and not fully edited which means there will be spelling & grammatical errors.
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Whispers of Passion | (18+)
RomanceAs he leaned in closer, I could feel the warmth of his breath on my face and his tempting lips mere inches away from mine. Our eyes locked onto each other, unable to look away as the tension between us grew stronger. We both knew what was about to h...
