The Mind’s Voice by Ryebread94
First Upload: July 17, 2011
Last Upload: April 16, 2012
8 parts (22 pages)
Reads- 355
Votes- 0
Comments- 4
PG-13
Romance & Mystery/Suspense
Summary:
Ryaan Carter is the new girl at school. With all the beautiful people around her Ryaan's confidence is shot. When Ryaan meets a new boy she fianlly feels like she's for once getting what she wants, A Fresh Start, but what is Ryaan's dark secret that she wants to hide so badly, she would kill to keep it a secret.
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The only thing I would change about this story is the spacing. In those big paragraphs it could be kind of hard to read on the computer or phone. That could turn off some readers.
But this was really good and well written.
As for Readers, she is looking for someone to make a trailer for this.
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