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Dabara Tumbler

Author: omahazeeya

Reviewer: Shivani_SwaSan

Chapters read : Prologue + 4 chapters

✒ Cover :-

I guess it's the simplest cover you've chosen for your story, which justifies your title and original plot. A nice cover. ❤ However, my main concern here was the type of font that was used here. Maybe a better font would look better, and stand out more. (Personally, script fonts are my fav 😅) Maybe you could also give that black background some effect, something like light leaks (effects from PicsArt) or anything that could give the cover a more attractive look.

But still, a fine cover for your story. Credit goes to the lovely editor.

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✒ Title :-

With the events you've shown in your story later on, the title 'Dabara Tumbler' goes well with your plot/storyline. Indeed a creative title and something that can hook a reader easily. Keep it up!!

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✒ Plot/Storyline :-

It's a very lovely tale which was also stuffed with lots of humour. Raghav's character was something that I liked a lot, because his character was really relatable to me.

The first chapter was more like an introductory chapter, from Raghav's point of view. I really liked the way he thinks about something and I also liked how you portrayed all the events that were involved in his daily life. Later on, the story is narrated in a third person perspective, and again the scenes hooked me towards the story. I liked Himani's character too, but maybe if you could show her POV too, her character might be clearer. ❤

Not much to say or pick any point from the story, because overall it was awesome and fun to read. ❤

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✒ Fascination :-

The creativity already comes from the title of your story. I was curious how you would portray the story. Blurb was enthusiastic, too. We get an idea about the main leads Raghav and Himani.

The fascination was the humour you carried in your story ❤ really enjoyed it. You have a good grip on humour and other elements that are needed in a story. So keep it up, dear.

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✒ Grammar :-

Grammar was simple, and accurate to the point. Great dialogue delivery, creativity in the sentences, and hardly any error in the story. It was very smooth and easy to read. Keep it up.

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✒ Overall :-

Overall, a lovely story to read and would love to read it further ❤

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✒Payment :-

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