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Dear readers,

I have realized,  I made a mistake. Those mistakes made the story more inconsistent. It really frustrated me. So, I have changed it. Basically, I wrote that Amara used magic out of school. When she was not even seventeen. To deal with this minor, yet, consequential issue, I have changed some of the sentences. It won't impact the story so far in a big way. I have included the changes below so it will be easy to understand what I am talking about.

Love,
girlofthunder

Chapter 44

"Even though she was not seventeen yet, the Ministry allowed magic if it was for the purpose of work. Once she ventured out of the department, she would not be allowed. It was not that useful."

Chapter 45

Original sentence:"Coming back with a stack of records and a levitating record player"

New sentence: "Coming back with a stack of records and a record player. She dragged the record player across the floor and pushed it into a lone corner."

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