PriRa FF: Will You Grow Old With Me?

Parental Love

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Next morning, Priya slowly opened her eyes to see herself caged in her husband's arms. She slightly tilted her head to see her husband who is sleeping with a small smile in his face.
Sensing her movements, even in his sleep, he slightly patted her to make her sleep comfortably which made her to look at him in awe.
She rested her chin upon her both hands which was placed  in his chest. She kept staring at him intaking his features. She slowly moved towards him and started placing series of kisses. She first pecked his forehead, then moved towards his both eyes which made him to scrunch his nose, she laughed and placed a soft kiss on his nose before pecking his cheeks. She kissed his chin, then corner of his lips and smiled when his stubble slightly pricked her. She softly ran her fingers over his stubble and was busy playing with his beard that she failed to notice the love filled gaze of her husband upon her. Ram had woke up when she placed a kiss on his forehead, he pretended to sleep to see his wife's antics. She always felt shy and never initiated anything when it comes to romance. But today they way she behaves made him happy. He expected her to kiss his lips but it looks like she will never do that as she was busy with his stubble. He swiftly turned her over and pinned her under him making her shocked.
Priya: when did you got up?
Ram: when you were busy adoring your husband.
She blushed hard on hearing as she was caught red handed.
Ram: I see my biwi likes to play with my beard.
Ram moved forward and rubbed his dark stubble over her cheeks and neck making her giggle. Hearing her giggle he looked at her with a broad smile as she looked so cute and adorable. He again rubbed his cheeks against her making her to hug him tightly giggling.
Priya: bas bas
Hearing her plead amidst her giggling made him stop. He slightly moved away from her to take a clear look at her. Both locked their eyes with eachother. Ram was practically lying over Priya. He was about to claim her lips while Priya had her eyes closed in anticipation. Suddenly a sharp pain on his back made him Yelp.
Ram: ouch
Hearing him shout in pain Priya opened her eyes to see him cursing under his breath with his eyes closed.
He slowly got up from her with his hands on his back. Priya straightened herself and touched him.
Ram: my back hurts so much biwi.
That's when Priya realised their surroundings. They had slept in the cold marble floor without any duvet, well only her husband slept in the floor as she practically slept upon him.
Priya: you shouldn't have slept in the floor. Main bhi pagal hoon. I'm sorry, yeh sab meri wajah se
Ram: arey chup ho jao na. It's paining Priya
Ram made a crying face while she pinched his cheeks smilingly which made him irritated.
Priya: aap bahut cute ho
Hearing her he can't help the little blush.
Priya: now get up slowly.
Priya helped him get up and took him to the bed. She started unbuttoning his kurta making him look at her shocked.
Ram: biwi I'm in pain but you are planning for something. Show some mercy on me.
Priya looked at him open mouthed.
Priya: shameless. I was going to apply balm on your back to relieve your pain.
He smiled at her sheepishly, while she continued to help him remove his kurta.
Priya: now you lie down on the bed.
Priya instructed him and went to get balm while lied down on comfortably on his stomach. Priya gently massaged his back while he moaned in pain. She kept massaging him till he went into a deep slumber. She allowed him to sleep as she know he was so tired with all the travel. She decided to get ready and wake him up little late.

Priya finsihed her morning chores and went to help tharun in making breakfast. After finishing all her work in the kitchen she went to wake up her husband but she found that he was already in washroom. She took out all his things and placed it orderly to help him getting ready starting from dress to a kerchief. She decided to set the breakfast table before he can come. Ram came out of the washroom with a towel around his waist and was about to call his wife's name but stopped seeing she had kept everything ready for him in the bed. She never ceases to amaze him. He smiled at her thoughtfulness and got ready to join her.