Tobias Haycraft. very good and strong work. there are more mistakes in this entry than in all the others but because it is a very strong piece... 10
Jay Calder. There are quite a few mistakes in it, for one it's spelled allies. it does not flow as well as previous entries have. 7
Seaver Parish. Very well written, a few minor mistakes. I really like the build up to the boy in the room but am unsure who he is.... good work. 8
Miles Wilson. It started off quite poor but then got really good and exciting. Keep an eye out for spelling and grammar! 9
Amabel Trython. Very nice work though the end felt a bit rushed. 8
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Writers Games; Alliances
FanfictionThese are the Games where alliances are made and broken. Who can you trust? Who can't you turn your back to for a single second? To survive you must join forces but the people you choose to work with can get you killed. You must be sly and cunning...
