15. Sick- Short Scene

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Hey! I updated the final part of 'Missing Manjiri Track' finally!...

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Abhimanyu: Akshu! Akshu! Kahan ho? Akshu!

Harshvardhan: (mutters lowly to Anand) Ho gya subah subah iska jaap shuru...

Abhimanyu: Akshu! (turns to Manjiri) Maa, Akshu kitchen me hai kya?

Manjiri: Nahi beta, vo toh neeche nahi aayi hai abhi tk...kya hua?

Abhimanyu: Usse kaha tha maine saath me hospital chalte hai, mai bs ek call complete kr raha tha aur usse breakfast table pr ane kaha tha...ruko mai dekh k rata hoon...

Harshvardhan: Arey aa jayegi, tum toh nashta krlo..

But Abhimanyu had already left, rushing two steps at a time.

Harshvardhan: Lo dekh lo bhaisahab! Khud late ho jayega pr madam ke bina nahi jayega...kya ban gaya hai mera beta...

Anand: (laughs) waise kuch bhi kaho, kaisa bhi ban gaya hai lekin Abhimanyu aajkl khush bohot rehta hai..

Nishtha: Ye baat toh hai.. tbhi aajkl bhai ko chidana mushkil ho gaya hai, itne happy mood me hote hai...

Manjiri smiled, feeling extremely happy while others laughed discussing how whipped Abhimanyu is. Suddenly they heard commotion. Abhimanyu was hurrying down the stairs with an annoyed, complaining Akshara in his arms.

Harshvardhan: Seriously bs yehi din dekhna baaki tha? Ab ye isse chalne bhi nahi dega...hr jagah bhahon me lekr ghoomega?!

Anand: Chup karo Harsh! Usse poochne toh do..

Manjiri: Abhi! Beta kya hua hai, tu Akshu ko aise..

Akshara: Maa! Dekhiye na, aap hi bolo isse...aise kon krta hai..

Abhimanyu: Chup kro tum...hum abhi ke abhi hospital jayenge...

Harshvardhan: Arey jao, lekin enter pairon pr hona...apne apne..

Akshara: Haan! Papa ab aap hi kaho na isse..

Harshvardhan: (in mind) meri sunta ho tb kahon na...

Abhimanyu: Chup raho tum! Maa Akshu ko ulti ho rahi thi jb mai room me gaya..

Akshara: Haan toh ho jaata hai...kl maa, maine, bhabhi aur Nishtha ne girls' party ki thi...late night eating ho gayi...bs habit nahi hai isliye shyd digest nahi hua sahi se...

Mahima glared at her bahu.

Shefali: (in mind: aise raaz nahi kholte Akshara!) vo mummy, aap hospital me they na..aur coincidently saare males bahar hi they raat ko isliye aur kissi ko involve nahi kr sake...

Akshara: (realizes her error) haan taiji...bohot miss kiya aapko..

Nishtha: please! (laughs) Mummy hoti na toh- (pauses when sees her bhabhis' expressions)...eh...toh- toh maza aata...accha waise mujhe ruk kr bhai ki saari harqat dekhni hai but I am late for school so byeee...

She quickly picked her bag and ran out.

Neil: Bhabhi ye toh galat baat hai, party vo bhi apke favourite devar ke bina..

Abhimanyu: Aap sb chup karo, topic se bhatkao mt mujhe...aur tum ( looks down towards Akshu who is clearly shy in his arms) baaten mt banao...hospital chalo..

Akshara pouted angrily as her last resort. Abhimanyu melted at her cute face and wanted to peck. When he bent down, Akshara's eyes widened as if reading his mind. Abhimanyu sobered at her expression, remembering they had an entire family of audience.

Abhimanyu: Aap sb ka ho gya toh I need to leave. It is an emergency.

Mahima: What?

Abhimanyu: Haan...I need to get all tests done...kuch bhi ho skta hai...koi internal problem hui toh...

Anand: Hey bhagwan! Ye khud doctor hai tb ye haal hai...agar nahi hota to pta nahi kya se kya soch leta..

Mahima: Exactly! Abhimanyu is so composed as a doctor lekin Akshara ke age saari padhai bhool jata hai... (loudly to Abhimanyu) Abhimanyu! Suno, khane ki wajah se hoga...Manjiri mai ek medicine deti hoon...Akshara you take rest today..

Akshara: Ji taiji...

Abhimanyu: Na-

Everyone started to explain so Abhimanyu, who he was over-reacting, had no excuse but to listen to all of them. He kept Akshara down with an angry- child face. Akshara gave him a victory smile. Abhimanyu looked at everyone with an annoyed glance and left.

Harshvardhan: Hush! Chalo mana toh sahi ye ladka....(to Anand) Bhai sahab, aap ek baar study me aiye..

Shefali left for work while Neil and Parth went to the backyard to discuss Neil's business idea.

Mahima: Manjiri tum Akshara ko kuch light khila do..mai medicine lati hoon..

Manjiri made Akshara sit on the couch and left to get something light for her. Akshara leaned into the couch and closed her eyes. She opened them with a start as she felt as if she was being lifted.

Akshara: what-

Abhimanyu had shifted her entire weight on one arm and with the other he clasped her mouth. She looked at him with her big doe eyes and mumbled.

Abhimanyu: Sorry Akshu! No risk with your health..

He muttered before rushing outside with her.

Manjiri and Mahima, who had entered the hall just as he reached the gate looked at the scene with shocked faces as Abhira disappeared out of their vision. Looking back at each other, they laughed.

Mahima: Beta pagal ho gaya hai tumhara Manjiri..

Manjiri: Sahi keh rahi ho didi..

Mahima: Mai toh soch rahi hoon kabhi Akshara pregnant hui toh ye kya bawal karega..

Mahima added while laughing before she gulped at the possibility. What if...? Turning her face towards Manjiri, she saw her sister looking at her with same calculative and shocked expressions.

Manjiri: Didi, agar ...mtlb...ho skta hai..toh??

Mahima: toh bhagwaan bachaye Abhimanyu se...hume ...aur Akshu ko..

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I think the current track is about to get angsty and sad. So a not so serious/sad short scene to feed the imagination while show is heavy on drama.

However I am blown by how good the episode was. Much better and honestly less painful than I expected because at least gusse me hi sahi, Abhi heard her and Akshara did not take the blame. Moreover, it was a personal conversation. Abhi seedha police ke saath nahi aa dhamka, family involve nahi ki. He spoke with her. Excited for next. This track will get wrapped up soon I guess ♥

xoxo

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