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Hi.
I want to explain to you why I didn't start the book with a scene directly since that seems to be the common suggestion.
I couldn't do that since there are a lot of things that the readers need to know, in order for them to understand their bond.
It sure seems like Ana's just rambling, but the information about how long they have been in each other's lives, how strong their family connections are, and all the other special things mentioned in the first chapter are crucial for building the foundation of the story and to denote the strength of their bond.
Also to show that they can't just up and leave each other.
I can't simply start with some scene because then readers wouldn't know that they aren't just Best Friends, but much more than that.
Everything mentioned in the first chapter has an important role to play in future chapters, so it was crucial to mention them.
I know that it's not written well, not even close, and I'm hoping to make some changes to it, but the material would remain the same.
I won't waste your time anymore.
Go ahead and read
And all constructive criticism is welcome.
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Romance" An Indian story background, but Non - Indians can easily connect with it." Ahana Kapoor and Arhaan Malhotra. Two best friends, who've been together since they were in diapers, in fact even before that. The connection they share is soo pure and hea...
