Grammar and punctuation (REVISED)

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If you notice a grammatical error, please politely point it out. I am trying to fix this story. It is one of my stories I am very proud of.

(My husband, since I have gotten into writing, for my birthday on June 4, 2023, gave me an app called GRAMMARLY. If you see the word revise in the title I have used  this program.  I am not changing the storyline. I am only working to correct the grammatical errors. )

I entered a  contest called Sunshine_Community, and I got first place in the Werewolf Genre. (May 2023)

The area in which I admit I scored the lowest score was grammar

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The area in which I admit I scored the lowest score was grammar. (6/10) I will admit I wasn't surprised. When you go forty-plus years just writing letters and nothing formal, it shows. I never expected to start writing in my late 50s, but I enjoyed it. Now just got to see an app or a person who is better at editing that I am.

The second lowest score was the book cover. I was able to change that.

 I did, at the request of my readers, write two more stories

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I did, at the request of my readers, write two more stories. (Book 3 is ongoing as of May 2023)

Book 2

This book, as of May 2023, is ongoing.

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