-note: this'll keep updating, until the contest ends, so check back in every now and then to see if your entry or other people's entries were added!-• Entry 1: Angels-Of-The-Lord
(Go check out their Fierrochase fic entry on their account!) Mmm, okay, so first of all—and I know I've commented it a bunch on your chapter—it's so cUTE. You've described Alex and Magnus perfectly, and you made me squeal at opportune times. The story flows really well, all the way through! As for constructive criticism, these are just my stupid thoughts, but I'd love to know more about what's going on with Mags—is it about his mother? Some kind of fight? Aside from that, great, great, great work! Thank you for entering!
• Entry 2: LeetheKale
(Go check out their Blitzstone fic on their account!) /deep breath/ First of all—the feels??? They were intense. Like,,, extreme feels?? Ahhh, aside from that, and more about the actual story. Hun; you have a gift for plots, like usually I just write something and have no idea where it ends up, but in this fic—it never felt like that. You did a great job incorporating the actual story with this AU—which a lot of authors who use AU's forget! Mm..constructive criticism? I would be honest to say that I wanted a little more description of Blitz just holding Hearth in silence, and just that whole build-up and rising action. Otherwise, excellent writing and A+++ job of making me cry—thank you for entering!
•Entry 3: tuttypatuty
(Check out their Fierrochase continuation of my last chappie in their randomness book!) Oi, first of all: I love mainly dialogue centered drabbles like this and ahh—I can't?? It's just so cute and funny! Like, write a short fic about Magnus eating a potato, and I would high-key read it because your writing style is so fun to read! As for criticism, I would've loved a little more depth into the character's perspective. Otherwise, awesome entry! Thank you so much for taking the time to enter!
•Entry 4: NicoTheZombie18
(Check out their Magnico AU in their HoO Oneshots book!) Phew. Okay, where do I start? First of ałl, I feel honored that you dedicated some time to this long piece of amazing work?? Like, thank you?? Ahhh, other than that, you're writing is absolutely gorgeous. I could imagine that I was there with all the descriptions—and it wasn't lengthy or boring, it was actually pretty funny! And holy shoot; the exchange between Magnus and Nico was so, so, so cute. Like, ahhhh, my pining children. As for criticism, I would liked more flow of kinda, maybe between the capturing of the hammer and Magnus. But, to be honest, I probably accidentally skipped a paragraph because I was sleep deprived. Thank you for entering with such an amazing entry!
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FanfictionHi, I'm Magnus. My friends and I answer some questions for you guys. Have fun reading about us doing and saying things against our will. For those of you fangirls wondering, Alex comes in the later chapters. (PLEASE NOTE: fic started waaaay befor...