Hello!! Sheep0 here and I wanna ask everyone a question really quickly..
When doing the characters dialog, should I keep it the way I do it or a diffrent way?
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The way I currently do it:
(Example)
"Danny Devito... w-why are you here?!" Said Y/N shocked as Danny Devito walked up to them.
"Because... we got a number 1 victory royal..." he started to say as he directed the film Matilda.
"D-d-d-d- Danny Devito... h.. how could you say those words?! Only... legends say that.." Y/N said as they looked at Danny Devito with tears.
"Because bb gurl... I'm secretly.... Danny Devito" he said which Y/N gasped in shock.
The end
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The different way:
(Example)
"Did you get a woppa?!" Danny Devito shouted in the house as Y/N started to laugh.
"Danny Devito what the heck?!" Y/N yelled as they started to laugh harder than ever.
"BB GURL I HAVE A CONFESSION TO MAKE!" Danny Devito said as he looked at Y/N. Y/N looked ar him confused.
"I'm secretly Gru... " he said as he looked to the floor as Y/N looked at him.
"I also have a confession to make... I'm secretly Barry the bee... ya like jazz?" Y/N said.
The end
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I know they are horrible examples but it's like 2:13 am when I'm writing this lmao. But which writing style should I carry on with??
Danny Devito be looking 😳😳😳🥵🥵😌😳
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