5 Centimeters Per Second by Eulissah
Reviewer : sharanyashiv7
Cover:
It was a simple one, with good picture quality.
Title:
Very unique as it has never been used by authors, this will attract readers.
Plot development:
The plot seems confusing and you have completed the book. Excellent work on plot development even though the plot was not catchy enough. It's hard to continue after the main plot but you did it efficiently, keep it up.
Blurb:
A very simple description but it could have been more descriptive and powerful on the sentences, good work on vocabulary.
Character development:
Good job on characters as only two characters were the main leads. Work on character development be it on emotions mentally and physically without the characters.
Grammar and Punctuation:
You did an excellent work on grammar and sentence structures. Good work on the choice of words and astonishing work on punctuations.
Flow:
You had used some poetic and thoughts writing, which is excellent for your story as its unique but you could have made it more descriptive and increased the poetic devices.
Reviewer Opinion:
• Use Formal English rather than Informal.
• Work on blurb and plot development.
• Work on character development.
• Try using more poetic devices.
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