Hello 1997 by daydreamingatnight19
Reviewer : sharanyashiv7
Cover:
It's a simple one with low picture quality. Please change your cover.
Title:
An okay title but can make it more attractive to readers.
Blurb:
A cute description and very simple to understand for the readers but make it descriptive and use new vocabularies.
Plot Development:
Well, I could not find any plot still as the story has reached only 8 chapters so I can't say on development but I think the plot is the love triangle between the three friends.
Character Development:
You need to work hard on emotions whether it's physical or mental to develop characters. Good choice on characters.
Grammar and Punctuation:
Everything was perfect, be it Grammar or sentence structures, keep it up.
Flow:
You're using script writing, try using descriptive and thoughts writing as these make the story more attractive.
Reviewer Opinion:
• Change your cover
• Work on blurb, Plot Development and Character Development.
• Use descriptive writing.
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