LIFE by Prarthana_dinesh
REVIEWER : sharanyashiv7
i) Cover:
A simple cover with good picture quality.
ii) Title:
Loved your title and subtitle, it's very unique.
iii) Blurb:
Love the way you wrote the blurb, you used quotes writing, Good choice on words.
iv) Plot Development:
What the writer wrote isn't a story so it has no plot but it shows the problems faced in life and the solutions to it.
v) Character Development:
Well there were no characters, basically I can't review anything on this point.
vi) Grammar and Punctuation:
Good job on punctuation and vocabulary. You had some grammatical mistakes and please use Formal English don't use short forms.
vii) Flow:
You used a philosopher's words in writing, excellent work.
viii) Reviewer Opinion:
Work on grammatical mistakes.
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