From A To Z by KT_Burns
REVIEWER : sharanyashiv7
i) Cover:
A cute one with medium picture quality.
ii) Title:
Very creative and unique, keep it up.
iii) Blurb:
Excellent work on description, Good use of vocabulary and you've used question based blurb.
iv) Plot Development:
Enticing work on the plot and coming to development well the plot is mysterious so I'm sure the development part would be difficult just work hard on the development part.
v) Character Development:
Superb job on the main characters be it Zoe, Arlo and others. Just be careful when developing characters be it physically or mentally.
vi) Grammar and Punctuation:
Excellent work on punctuation. You had some grammatical mistakes and please use Formal English rather Informal. Good work on the choice of words.
vii) Flow:
You used all three types of writing good work for that but try using more descriptive words and phrases.
viii) Reviewer Opinion:
You can change your cover, if you want.
Look into your grammar mistakes.
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