Weird and Wonderful by daydreamingatnight19
REVIEWER : sharanyashiv7
i) Cover:
Simple cover with low picture quality.
ii) Title:
Superb title as I've never seen anything like this.
iii) Blurb:
An intriguing description, good choice on the words.
iv) Plot Development:
The plot seems interesting as Sarthaak and she are going to meet, try working hard on the plot development.
v) Character Development:
Great effort taken on the characters and character development whether it's physical or mental.
vi) Grammar and Punctuation:
Good work on punctuation and on Vocabulary. Work on Formal English.
vii) Flow:
You used all the three types of writing superb work.
viii) Reviewer Opinion:
Change your cover.
Work on grammar.
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