Deadliest Combination by DebotriMukherjee
Reviewer: sharanyashiv7
Cover:
The cover was excellent, superb quality on the images and on the edits.
Title:
A simple one though it has a huge impact on the story, the title perfectly matches it.
Blurb:
A simple one yet attractive to the readers, good work on vocabulary in the description, keep it up.
Plot development:
Well, the story has not yet reached the main plot hence can not be stated but the plot is definitely a good one and this will attract readers.
Character development:
An extremely excellent work on character development, as you worked on emotions whether it's physically or mentally. Good work on the characters as well since everyone was absolutely perfect in their characterisation.
Grammar and Punctuation:
Please work on your sentence structures as there were some grammatical mistakes. Good use of vocabulary as you used new words. Please use Formal English rather than Informal. Superb work on punctuations.
Flow:
You had used some descriptive thoughts and script writing, good work on it but try being more descriptive as it will be more attractive to the readers.
Reviewer Opinion:
• Work on grammatical Mistakes.
• Try being more descriptive.
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