Chalo ek baar fir ajnabi ban jayein hum by daydreamingatnight19
Reviewer : sharanyashiv7
i) Cover:
Poor picture quality please change it.
ii) Title:
A very unique one.
iii) Blurb:
You had no description but only a single sentence, please look into it.
iv) Plot Development:
The story has only completed 6 chapters so I can't yet identify the plot and so I can't say much on plot development.
v) Character Development:
First of all, Good job on the characters that you had selected since the story has just started. I can't give my opinion or character development but make sure to look at each character while working on it.
vi) Grammar and Punctuation:
Good job on both of them but simple mistakes on the title itself 'fir' and 'jayein' it should be 'phir' and 'jayen'
vii) Flow:
You used descriptive and script writing, excellent work on it but try using thoughts writing.
viii) Reviewer Opinion:
Change your cover.
Work hard on blurb.
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