Good day dear readers,
I've decided that I'm going to rewrite this book and then write it off. Now the only question was which way of writing you prefer: the 1st person or the 3rd person.
I will give a short example here.
1st person:
I watched from the tall windows of the palace at the group of people gathered in the courtyard. I felt myself getting more nervous by the minute. Just the thought that everyone there would have an opinion about me made me feel uncomfortable. What if those people weren't impressed with me and my low birth?
3rd person:
Lucrezia watched from the high windows of the palace at the group of people gathered in the courtyard. She felt the nervousness growing. She was afraid of the opinion of all those people, afraid that they would not be impressed by her or her low birth.
I hope to hear your opinion soon and hope that you will be enthusiastic about the sequel to this book.
YOU ARE READING
The Italian Rose || The Tudors
Historical FictionYou know how a story ends but you don't know how it starts, to get to the core of the story you have to go back to the beginning. After the death of Anne Boleyn, Lucrezia De'Medici is married off by her great-uncle, The pope, to the King of Englan...
