Before anyone wants to mouth off I just want to say you have your opinion and I respect that and also I respect all the characters of Dragon Ball and despite what bends and memes Toei keeps binding themselves too. I'm ol go the extra mile for development in my story. Also, I'm ol do a Dragon Ball Super Sequel to this and by the end of the Goku Black Arc, you'll see, how my story is different or alters from Toei using the same old formulas and degrading foundational characters just for the sake of plot. Toriyama did it to Yamcha only did it to the point where it was justified and deserved. If anything Hercule's the joke character. The degradation of Yamcha is just an old marketing meme that just works for Toei and they don't go the extra mile for development they just take shortcuts every chance they get. Goten and Trunks by this point of DBS are supposed to be 13 and 14 years old and throughout all 83 episodes as of me publishing this, Goten and Trunks have had the exact same character design. And if you have prioritized material and drawings to work with than you're just keeping two characters the exact same as they debut as just for the sake of laziness. So if any other you want to mouth off go ahead I appreciate criticism, and others opinion I'm still going write because it's my story
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