Username: @LordlsHere
Title: Who The Hell Is Peter Muse?
The title is good and quite intriguing. It focuses on the main conflict of the story.
Cover: The quality of the picture is quite bad. Except that, this cover is good.
Summary: The summary is short, crispy and interesting. I did not notice grammatical mistakes worth mentioning. But I think putting a question of conflict can pull readers in.
Story: Grammatically, the story has no such problem. The chapters are quite short. For a Wattpad book, longer chapters are more appreciated. In spite of those little mistakes, the story is a really good read.
I still think you could give more insight to the mental disorder you have decided to put stress on. Some points on the symptoms of the disease seem vague, especially the hallucinations. Also, the part where things are revealed about his background is vague. You should work on making the things clearer. Other than that, this story is a wonderful read. I really don’t have much to say.
Rating: 8/10.
Happy Writing! :)
By - HerSpectre
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