Jinx ~ Rewritten

Chapter 4

Fade in. Scene opens with an image of the apartment block, the room, and then DAN's hands gripping the bedsheets.

JAEKYUNG: Goddamnit. Relax, would you? You're gonna snap my cock off. 
DAN: That's on you for doing it so suddenly, asshole! You need to warm up first!
JAEKYUNG: No time. I need to fuck now or I'll lose tomorrow.
DAN: How romantic.

JAEKYUNG grips DAN's hair and pulls his head back.

DAN: Agh!
JAEKYUNG: Oh, so you've chosen to die today?
DAN: Like I'd want your face to be the last I'd ever see. Ack!
JAEKYUNG [Internal]: I don't get it. Why is he still talking back? He knows I could snap his head off easily right now. So why...?

Scene shows DAN's expression from JAEKYUNG's perspective.

JAEKYUNG: Fine.

JAEKYUNG pulls out and grasps DAN's dick, rubbing him now.

DAN: Huh? [Glances back at JAEKYUNG] You're actually...?
JAEKYUNG: Shut up and take it.

JAEKYUNG leans in to his neck, sucking his skin there. DAN lets out pleased sounds. Shots cut between JAEKYUNG jacking him off and his mouth trailing against his skin.

DAN: Huu...
JAEKYUNG: You better loosen up after this, Kim Dan.
DAN [Gulps, exhales]
JAEKYUNG: I'm not waiting anymore.

Scene continues to show DAN being touched as he lets out sounds.

DAN: Close... haa...

JAEKYUNG glances at the clock. He scowls.

JAEKYUNG [Internal]: Hurry up and cum.

Title screen.

DAN is shown cumming onto the bed. JAEKYUNG then moves back to his previous position and aligns his dick with his hole.

JAEKYUNG: No running away. [Thrusts inside] Okay?

Shot follows DAN's expression.

DAN: Ack!
JAEKYUNG: Ah, you are relaxed.
DAN: Wait!
JAEKYUNG: No. Suck it up.

JAEKYUNG pulls out and thrusts back in. DAN's mouth drops, blushing now.

DAN [Internal]: After just cumming, this is way too much stimulation. And his thing is huge - it's like I'm being impaled...
JAEKYUNG: Ah... feels soft inside. 
DAN: Ugh, don't say that.
JAEKYUNG: Why not? [Thrusts out, then back in]
DAN: Slower! Ergh!

JAEKYUNG continues. Shots are shown of DAN's insides being penetrated. JAEKYUNG hits his prostate, DAN feels a jolt of pleasure run through him.

DAN [Internal]: Haa! There! ...R-right there!
JAEKYUNG: Tensing up again, aren't you? I'm not even all in yet.
DAN [Internal]: There's more to go?
DAN: Fuck...

Shot shows DAN gripping onto the bedsheets. He breathes in.

DAN [Internal]: I'm losing my mind...

Shot shows JAEKYUNG thrusting inside him, hitting the prostate.

DAN: Aagh!
JAEKYUNG: You like it there, don't you?

DAN nods his head. JAEKYUNG smirks at the silence.

JAEKYUNG: What was that? Can't hear you.
DAN: Shh... shut up...
JAEKYUNG: Pfft.

JAEKYUNG thrusts forward completely. His hands grip DAN's hips as he takes a deep breath in.

JAEKYUNG: Taking all of me now. Wasn't that hard, now, was it?
DAN: Ergh...