What The Heart Wants

A/N: Polling The Crowd

I haven't taken the pulse of the readership in a bit, and with me now posting this story on AO3 in addition to here, I thought I'd ask you of your opinions vis-a-vis what the commenters there are telling me.

1) Do you find any of the characters shallow, "bitchy", or the break-ups and pairings unbelieveable?

2) I have been accused of being deluded to the notion of Krashlyn. Yes/no?

3) The story on AO3 is currently at the point where Ali and Ashlyn officially break up, whereas here four months have passed from then. Does the story in your opinion "get better" after that, and those reading it need to stick with it to get to that point?

4) Do you find I have any obvious axes to grind or biases in my writing?

Please comment and provide some feedback as we draw near the start of the NWSL season and some of the relationships begin to become more cemented.