CLN's Seasonal Reviews (CLOSED)

Angel Full of Flowers - by - writingjuniper

Review done by HAPPINESS_IS_YOU_

Remember, this whole review is my own view of your book and every person has different choice's and opinions. What I am liking might not be liked by someone else. Please remember this as you read.

COVER (8.7/10)

The background of the cover is really beautiful and perfectly fits the 'peace look' the word 'angel' brings.
The colours are soothing and fill the mind with peace. The text, which includes the title of the story and the author's name are a bit too much white I think. Everything looks perfect together.
I would just advice you to darken the colour of text used. The font and everything is great but they all are shadowing the text. I understand that you or whoever made the cover tried to make the cover look angelic but maybe try using golden too so that there will be a bit more colours in the cover. Golden is an angelic colour too so that won't put it against what you were expecting.

TITLE (9.8/10)

The title is unique and refreshing.
I love two things very much. Uncommon words which you don't use in everyday life and the way common words are blend together to form a unique title. So bonus points for you.
Angel and flowers are really common words which look great together the way you made it.

DESCRIPTION/BLURB (9/10)

The description is perfect. A perfect blend of informations and mystery.
The way you described Camellia's feeling and hope, the way a perfect image of Angel formed in mind and the wonderful way the last two lines of the descriptions made me think that 'What happened?'.... It was perfect.
But as they say, nothing can be the best, this too is here the problem. The description can be improved in many ways but most importantly, I would advise you to make it a bit long. It was of medium length but I personally prefer long descriptions.

PLOT (9.8/10)

[Spoiler's Alert]

The plot was so good. I was expecting some angels but I got an angel with short hight than the female lead.
There was a lot of comedy in the least expected moments. The letters to Camellia's mother were soo good that they gave my heart peace.
Simply amazing.
I think I deserve to know how Angel kept himself hidden? Won't a face of boy be different than that of a girl?

FLOW OF THE STORY (10/10)

The flow of the story was perfect. Not too fast paced and not too slow.
There was enough information and drama that I couldn't stop myself from reading it all at the same time and write it too.
Truly amazing.

CHARACTERS DEVELOPMENT (7.3/10)

Honestly, I am kind of sad to say this but I didn't saw any character development from Camellia's point of view till now.
Yes, Angel was a bit bad in the beginning but then he started changing a bit too. He waited till her panic went away and he told her that he couldn't swim and it was his vulnerability. From what we can read till now, he didn't liked to show his vulnerable side yet he trusted her and when their conversation ended, Camellia didn't even bother to think about what he said in the way he told her that she didn't know anything about him.
I would advise you to make Camellia's character develop a bit.

WRITING STYLE (9.3/10)

Well it's not everyday I read a story and like the way it is written. Mind you, I am very choosy in my reads.
There were close to none grammatical mistakes, the way of writing was really good too and punctuation was perfect as well.
I would just advise you to re-read your story once and try to form some lines a bit differently.

GENRE RELEVANCE & TAGS USED (8.9/10)

Well I haven't yet understand the title.... Maybe Angel is his name and flower is generally associated with females so it's his deception.... But since its the title of the book so we can excuse it.
Trauma, I don't think it was mentioned yet so... I will cut sone points for it.

READER'S ENJOYMENT (10/10)

I am a reader too and I really loved the book. And reading tye comments readers wrote here and there, they agree with me on this.
This book is fabulous.
Most of the comments are stating that its so funny and wow and all good things.

REVIEWERS PERSONAL LIKING (9.9/10)

[The reviewer is getting a bit crazy so.... Warning]

The header of author's note was so good. I really loved it. The pictures were good too.
Now the craziness starts....
Ohhhhhhhmyygoddd. This is definitely a favourite kind of story.
When I read that it was like anime, I thought that I won't like it and all that but really? But I think my prejudice was really wrong.
This is one of those wow kind of books which you have to read in a single sitting. There is no other way out.
Ahhmazing...
And here comes a fresh as flowers overall for your story!
In three seconds!
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OVERALL (92.8/100)

If you love teenage drama with twists and turns everywhere and a pinch (which is quite a bit) of humour, then this book is for you. Definitely worth your time.