TCF X ORV - The Rise of Caleism in Another World

CHAPTER 22 - First Day of the Third Scenario

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{Kim Dokja POV}

    As I watched the surging wave of monsters, I gave strength to my thighs. The level 15 strength condensed at once and my feet developed a strong propulsion force.

    The ground rats ran from all directions and the hard horns of the grolls flew from unexpected places.

    My skin, which was tempered by the level 15 stamina, became bruised and bloody from the grolls’ horns.

[The number one bookmark has been activated.]

    Bookmark was activated and Kim Namwoon’s Blackening wrapped around my body. I pushed away all the monsters coming from the front.

    Fangs burrowed into my body and a few ground rats bit my thighs. However, I didn’t stop. Run and run again.

     Over here. Finally, the original wall was visible. I jumped over the ground rats. There was a green zone for two people shining.
By the way…shit.

[Green Zone 1/2]

    There was already someone inside.
“…”

    I forgot about the monsters coming from behind and stared at him. There was a guy who should never be there.

“Hey.”

He turned to me.

“Can’t you get out? You don’t even need to stay in here.”

“It is difficult. I am tired today.”

    I pushed to punch this asshole’s face. I didn’t understand. This wasn’t the ‘third regression’ Yoo Jonghyuk that I knew.

    In Ways of Survival, it was written that Yoo Jonghyuk only found the first hidden green zone in the fourth regression… damn, did he know about this place since the second regression and it just wasn’t described? Then why didn’t he originally use it in the third regression?

Grrrr!

   There were the cries of the ground rats chasing me from behind. It was too late to blame the writer. I could feel Lee Gilyoung’s breathing. I stared into Yoo Jonghyuk’s eyes. We spoke at almost the same time.

“Take the kid.”

“Give me the child.”

   Still, it was lucky. The constellations would hear my words.

[Green Zone 2/2]

    I moved Lee Gilyoung and the mark of the green zone changed. Now Lee Gilyoung was safe.

“Hyung! Wait a minute! Hyung!”

    Lee Gilyoung urgently tried to rush towards me but Yoo Jonghyuk’s hand restrained him. I swung my sword towards the ground rats.

[The constellation ‘Bald General of Justice’ has closed his eyes.]

[The constellation Demon-like Judge of Fire is watching you with uncomfortable eyes.]