Final thoughts

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If you manage to come this far, I would like you as a reader to comment what you think.

This is my "first" completed story, started early high school. As expected, there are certain things in this story that plainly seem bad.

I'm asking for you to leave feedback, both GOOD and BAD Critique what the story needs to do and should be avoided.

I wanted to learn more so I can make the story better for viewers.

Please to do not attack each other in the comments,  opinions are allowed to be express, but do explain throughly to give an honest thought.

With that being said, thank you so much for coming this far.

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