Hey everyone, just to say another big thank you for the number of votes and reads, it means a lot to me.
I just wanted to say that i have now gone back and corrected the book so i now feel like the book flows better. the main difference is that jordan and trix didnt spend that evening/ night together in i think it was chapter... 9 or 10. it was the chapter where jordan surprised her in her bedroom. that has been changed to someone who we dont yet know who it is. trix goes downstairs and finds a mysterious guy in the garden. she then calls jordan to help her but the guy goes away.
the other main change is jordans motives and how jordan and zayn didnt have a fight in the begining. you have to read it to properly know what im talking about, but if you really dont want to, just know that there is a mysterious guy watching trix who she has now stupidly forgotten about.
xx thanks
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The Country Girl meets The City
Teen FictionTrixy Greyson is a country girl who has to move to a new town to help her mother recover from her fathers recent demise. Trixy is joining a new girls school. However she is unaware that it shares its grounds with two neighbouring boys school. Little...
