Being With You

khana and patel last part

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neil:(holding her hand)"avni main tumhe koyi gift nahi donga main tumhe ek promise
....promise ki main hamesha tumhara saath donga....promiss ki main kabhi bhi tumhe kuch nahi hone donga.... main hamesha tumhe pyaar karonga...marte dam tak"

avni:(tears in her eyes)"Neil...yeh best gift hai"

neil:(wiping her tears )"or tum mera best gift"

bebe:"very good job both couples are good but this comparability test was won by neil and avni"

ruhi and mishti: (coming in and jumping) "yehhhh avneil avneil won..."

everyone:"avneil??"

ruhi:"haan avni "

mishti:"or neil "

ruhi and mishti:"equals avneil..."

avneil smile at the kids and walk towards them and kisses their cheeks

viren:"chalo yeh sab games kehlne ke baad muhje bahut book lag rahi hai khana kahaye..."

dadi:"haan chalo"

juhi:(in her mind)"avneil, avneil ,avneil, avneil arrrrhhh main thak gayi...yeh avneil sonkar....neil ese kaise move on kar sakta hai.....or jab use mari jaan ke bare main pata chalega toh woh kya karega...uski toh ek bati bhi hai...is sabke piche us avni ka haath hai...na woh neil ki zindagi main aati nah main or neil alag hote....or yeh log kya laga ke rake hain ki avni neil ki jodi world ki best jodi hai....muhje toh nahi dikhta....or yeh mishti avneil ki beti....ek dum avni jaisi hai.......or avni bhi a mahanta ki morat hai ek dum buri... usme esa kiya hai jo muhje me nahi hai...woh toh ek najayaz hai....woh ek paap hai or woh neil ko nahi deserve karti....neil ko sirf main deserve karti hoon or jab avni ko pata chalega mari jaan ke bare main toh woh neil se kud ba kud door chali gayegi....main upne neil ko wapas pake rahongi"(her thought process was broken when Avni called her to have dinner....)

(* hey guys I felt so bad trying to write bad about avni ...but had to  show how much juhi hates avni and what the real face of juhi is i had to write but don't worry this face will reveal soon in front of  everyone..... )

after dinner .....

prakash:"ab humhe chalna chahiye..."

bebe:"haan bahut late hogaya..."

dadi:"okay..."

viren:(hugging neil)"phir milte hain avni or mishti ko bhi Lana"

neil:"haan"

ruhi:"mumma mishti  thori or see NAHI ruk sakti..."

avni:( on her knees) "don't worry beta ...hum phir aayenge and is baar aap bhi anna or chaho toh sleep over bhi kar sakte ho ..."

ruhi:(kissing avni's cheeks)"aap bahut acchi ho thank you ...."

avni:" aap bhi bahut acchi ho...."

they started to leave ....

avni:"neil main piche baati hoon cause mishti neend main hai..."

neil:"hmmm"

mishti: "muhje supermen or angle dono chahiye..."

avni:"mishti neil ko drive karna hai na..."

mishti: "plz angle..."

prakash:"ek kaam karte hain main ye  gardi chala leta hoon or ali woh ..."

avni:"per papa ji aap "

prakash:"puttar main chalaonga..."

neil:"theek hai papa...."

(* so to be clear......car 1 has prakash in driver seat , sweata beside him and neela and bebe at back seat .....car 2 has ali in driver seat,  juhi beside him , and avneil with mishti in back...)

avneil car.....

avni head was on Neil's shoulders while neil' s arms were around avni.....mishti was laying down her head on avni's lap and her legs on Neil's lap...

juhi:(in mind)"yaar yeh mishti ki wajah se avneil close hai....avneil main une avneil kyun bolaya....juhi who avneil kabhi nahi ho sakte ..main tune avneil nahi bane dongi...for sirf avni or neil hai......arhhh juhi you said avneil like 4 times and this is 5th... yeh avni ki beti no wajah se aaj yeh ek saath hai per ab meri jaan ki wajah se alag ho gayege...."

they reached home and mishti was a sleep so neil carried her in her room and avni covered her with blanket...both of them kissed mishti on the head ......while this someone was watching and not being happy.....
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precap:"juhi and her jaan....will juhi separate avni and Neil....or is there another twist..."