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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
I really do only get bnha or original characters, don't I? That's fine with me! Here is a bnha oc by BlizzardArrow
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding / character information
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really like this character for the most part, all I can say is create a wider range of hobbies since everything else is great! Just focus on developing your character more and making her more detailed.
Relationships
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These seem like pretty realistic relationships to have with everybody, so all I can say is develop them more and think of relations with distant relatives and such.
Backstory
This was N/A so I really recommend developing a Backstory for this character because it shows why they are who they are. Developing an incredibly well thought out backstory will make your character a lot better.
Other
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I really like this and I have no points of improvement here.
Stats
Again, I recommend coming up with some stats, this gives basic grounding for your character to stand on so you know what you're working with.
Final thoughts I really like what you've come up with with this character, but more development is needed for your character to be even better then it already is.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you of course do not have to listen to what I've said. This us all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
