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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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Interesting concept. When it comes to creepypasta, it's better to not me involved in the community in my eyes.
Character information
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Yes!!! An actual scary creepypasta oc! I love the sound of her design because she sounds genuinely scary. Apart from that, everything seems to work pretty well so there's nothing I can really tell you to improve upon.
Relationships
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These relationships make sense and work well with the character as long as they have an impact on her, which I'm sure they do.
Backstory
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This follows the tradition campfire spooky story and honestly I quite like it, it's far better then what we get with the current big creepypastas. There's not really much I can say since designing a character that's meant to be scary doesn't have to have everything explained, because that stops to creepiness of it. So if anything, don't explain too much of the character in the future to keep the fear of the unknown aspect.
Stats
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These stats are pretty balanced and make sense, they add to her fear factor which makes her better.
Final thoughts As someone who's been in this community for years, I really do appreciate ocs like this who don't follow the normal formula (because it's bad). A lot of people in this community forget that the characters are meant to be scary. Very good job with this and there's not much you need to improve on, so keep up the good work.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you of course do not have to listen to what I've said. This us all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
