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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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Cool cool.
Character information
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As per usual with your characters, they're very well done. There aren't actually any issues here and there isn't even anything I can think to suggest as an addition. Very good job here.
Relationships
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Again, very good. Just make sure that these relationships effect the character and help build her up and it should all work smoothly.
Backstory
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These points all make pretty goos sense in the grand scheme of things and I like that she's a police officer and you actually described the process of her getting the qualifications needed to do so. Good job on that.
Other
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Interesting quirk but it does seem to last really long for a quirk of that type. Maybe have it so the longer she maintains eye contact the longer the effects are, because that flows a bit better and makes sense.
Stats
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These stats are pretty well balanced so it's all good.
Final thoughts Overall, an incredible character as always. There's literally only one addition I can come up with here. Very well done!!
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
