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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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Alright, this is an interesting concept but just be careful with this we don't wanna cause any drama with concepts like this.
Having read on, this concept doesn't seem to impact the world too much and you could have a family of female rulers in an average fantasy realm. This concept doesn't really come into play.
Character information
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There's not really much to say here because this works pretty good for her character but maybe add some more detail with her personality because even though she's plain, she needs to have something going for her.
Also that is one hell of a name so be careful with that, but it can pass since she's a royal.
Relationships
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These relationships work well and function with the character. Maybe add some more detail with the interactions she has with her siblings and develop that stable boy but apart from that there's no issues here.
Backstory
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This works but make sure it all makes sense and flows properly especially when dealing with killing family members. Death isn't something to just brush over bad you have to show the effect of this task on the characters.
Other
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Cool, but if she can use them well then you should mention that she was trained at some point do that she can remain realistic.
Stats
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Stats are balanced so these are fine.
Final thoughts Like the other characters you've had me review, I really like this character but I think you need to smooth out a few bumps and develop her further on certain sections. Apart from that, we'll done.
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
