REQUESTS ARE CLOSED
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Another review for Utatane_Piko_V2, even though I don't know why you keep requesting them because they're normally pretty well done and I can't add much lol.
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding
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It's the same universe as before so I don't have any notes here.
Character information
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I like the sound of this guy, a lot of detail has clearly been put into him and what he suffers from. His personality is believable, but you could afford to give him some more positive traits. Some of these hobbies are quite common, so maybe give him a wider range of hobbies.
