Here is a review for zazalord
My comments will be in bold
Basics and grounding
You should probably think over how this would work but it sounds pretty neat.
Character information
This is pretty good for the most part but I have a bone to pick with his personality. Obviously people can act different around different people however, most people almost always have some definate traits. So you need to figure out a couple of those so we know what personality type and stuff he is. Like is he extroverted? Introverted? Stuff like that since we don't know.
Relationships
I applaud you for implementing traditions and sticking to them though I feel this could be confusing. Be sure to develop these relationships and make sure they help grow the character.
Backstory
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