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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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I like the sound of her appearance and it's not very often I get OCS this age. She is very tall though, but that works in this universe. I just don't understand why she likes messing with the teachers? Also, I recommend putting more detail into her personality to make her more unique and feel like her own person.
Relationships
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I don't have any problems here since all of this seems to fit her character pretty well.
Backstory
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I mean, it would be a bit odd for an adult to be in a high school class and I'm not sure if that is even possible, but apart from that, this is a good backstory and you don't see many like this, so I actually really like it. Other
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I'm struggling to imagine how her quirk works, so all I can say is add more detail and flesh her quirk out more so that it's easier to understand.
Stats
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You forgot to include how trustworthy, but I get the feeling she is pretty trustworthy. Most stats should be in the mid-range and you need at least one that is a 1 in order to balance out the 5 you've given her.
Final thoughts I really like the sound of this oc, she's pretty unique as fair as bnha ocs go and it's nice to have a breath of fresh air, so good job!
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you, of course, do not have to listen to what I've said. This is all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
