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Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS an...
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He seems pretty well balanced and cool. All I can say is be careful basing a character off of yourself, there's nothing wrong with it, but you could be accused of creating a self insert. Personally, I have nothing against self inserts so I don't mind if it is, but some people could call you out on it. As long as the character isn't just a 'better version of you' it should be completely fine.
I suggest giving him a wider range of hobbies and interests, most people like doing a lot of things, even if they're just small. The more detailed a character and their interests, the more believable and likable the character.
Relationships
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I don't have anything wrong with this, it's well thought out an detailed, so good job.
Backstory
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I actually really like this Backstory, it's unique and I don't think I've seen something like this before in this fandom. I genuinely like this story, so good job.
Other /stats
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This is pretty good, I really like his quirk too. I recommend most stats being in the mid range, but these are pretty decent stats and I think this character is actually pretty good.
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Final thoughts I really like this character. He's well thought out and balanced, a few corrections here and there could really add to this character and make him even better! But I do really like this guy, so great job!
*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you of course do not have to listen to what I've said. This us all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*
