Review 53 // Korah

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Here we have another creepypasta character by Foxshade05

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding

Some interesting inspirations, though I don't really recommend using existing creepypastas as inspiration because that could cause it to just blend in with the rest of them

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Some interesting inspirations, though I don't really recommend using existing creepypastas as inspiration because that could cause it to just blend in with the rest of them.

Character information

Character information

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Good job on trying to research a mental illness and making her ace

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Good job on trying to research a mental illness and making her ace. I'm not a fan of Neko ocs because they're meant to be cute, but since the point of this is to try and make one scary, I'll let it slide without bias. I do approve of the fact you're actively trying to make her scary though.

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